|Reviews for Be It Unchained|
| SliversofSilverPain 8/31/05 . chapter 1
very eloquent, very nicely put... I like it, very pretty, sweet and hopeful. Nice
| krystalpendragon 6/16/05 . chapter 1
great job, i liked how it was kinda simple, stated nicely. laterz
| Plato's Socialist Democracy 1/30/05 . chapter 1
Tartarus holds it in its clutches too long for any to hold their breath, but by generations it lives in this temple if no where else.
| catseyeview 1/29/05 . chapter 1
The yearning is so felt here.
| Fabian Cortez 1/17/05 . chapter 1
So much truth in this.
Few words make a point that should be heard by everyone.
"Love, be it unchained"
| Amaranth of Grey 1/16/05 . chapter 1
thought provoking. So concise and artistic. I enjoyed. A beautiful haiku. Keep up the good work.
| Miz E. Mak 1/14/05 . chapter 1
Awesome... I know that feeling which you have in you while pouring this onto paper. Man, I've felt so much like that lately. Good work.
| godawful teen-angst poetry 1/14/05 . chapter 1
lovely, as always. your poetry is so...graceful? I don't think that's the word I'm looking for, but it will do for now. Keep writing, please.
| poetic abortion 1/14/05 . chapter 1
I love this haiku so much. :D It's so deep and adorable. X3 Kawaii! -
| simpleplan13 1/13/05 . chapter 1
::sigh:: very well written.. I love that last line
| Frosted Midnight 1/13/05 . chapter 1
very short , very sweet , i liked it!
| Koriina 1/12/05 . chapter 1
| Joewhatever 1/12/05 . chapter 1
I'm not a fan of haikus really...but I liked this. Nice write.