very eloquent, very nicely put... I like it, very pretty, sweet and hopeful. Nice

great job, i liked how it was kinda simple, stated nicely. laterz

Tartarus holds it in its clutches too long for any to hold their breath, but by generations it lives in this temple if no where else.

Love unchained,PSD

The yearning is so felt here.

So much truth in this.

Few words make a point that should be heard by everyone.

"Love, be it unchained"

Exceptional!

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

thought provoking. So concise and artistic. I enjoyed. A beautiful haiku. Keep up the good work.

Awesome... I know that feeling which you have in you while pouring this onto paper. Man, I've felt so much like that lately. Good work.

lovely, as always. your poetry is so...graceful? I don't think that's the word I'm looking for, but it will do for now. Keep writing, please.

lyv

I love this haiku so much. :D It's so deep and adorable. X3 Kawaii! -

Noelle

::sigh:: very well written.. I love that last line

very short , very sweet , i liked it!

:D

I'm not a fan of haikus really...but I liked this. Nice write.