again.

utterly beautiful. you are such a ..there isn't even a word for your style and individuality ability and skill. thank you for posting all your work. i love it so much.

-salt.

Why do you write instead of sing or scream. Proclaim your message get it out. Stnad on a street corner if you must, Im sure everyone would enjoy it. May the storm still be over in your mind for it seems that something is coming, something to shake this age with not fear or hatred or even love. Wonder

so many interesting concepts...nicely done

Wow! This is awesome. There is so much more I want to say about this but I can't even find the words.

A flowing smooth poem i like its political (i think but its nice) see ya im off Aalagi-san

Nice piece of work. I am speechless. It feels complete and the ending is just right!

This is absolutely beautiful. Love it.

wow...scary...i can relate

you seem to have a lot to say in this poem. I can not say that i understand this poem completely (cuz i didn't write it) but i do feel your desire for freedom. awesome work

I love 's deep and it has so many layers too really great.

interesting...i luv it...

good, but a little confusing. still i really like the detail and imagery in the poem.

Wow, the words you chose and the way you set it out it was so beautiful!

Wow! you go because this is a powerful piece of work and I love it by the way more and more I read this the more and more I can understand this. This is a job well down I got to say. I would like your opinion on some of my work if you don't mind tell what you thikn is it good or bad. I just love this poem keep up the good work.

Excellent, throughout this I could sense the words of your soul sing to make a poem of real depth and emotion.

Beautiful

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

I'd value your thoughts on some of my latest. See what you think. :)