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McKinley Cooper 2009-01-04 . chapter 1
I, too tend to be able to write more when tragedy is present in my life--at least this is what this is saying to me.

The results of our trails and heartaches being the stain of tragedy on a once blank page is such a startling, yet somehow obvious way for me to understand why writer's block usually occurs for me when things are going pretty well...

Smart, swift, and well said. Great job!

McKinley

(if you haven't heard the song, "Tragedy" by Brandi Carlile, I encourage you to youtube it...you'll be amazed--promise ;)
Lily D'Arouet 2006-02-17 . chapter 6
"sugar hill," dear? "string and wood"? is this a tribute to our favorite guitar player, perhaps?

at any rate, i like the poem. WUV. [by the way, he's running out of 2sies... just tomorrow!]
White is a Sin 2005-12-10 . chapter 2
oh, this is thought out i think, though people think that poems are good when they're not thought out!

well see ya
White is a Sin 2005-12-10 . chapter 1
kool, kay then...
Kira 2005-11-07 . chapter 4
this is awesome.
Queen of the Faerie Folk 2005-10-03 . chapter 4
Very nice...dramatic...loverly...as usual...reminds me of myself a bit...you know..how i've ben masking my emotions..yeah

Lily D'Arouet 2005-03-29 . chapter 3
you misspelled "really" as "realy". other than that, very cute, very... uh... right...

blessed be, lily
Queen of the Faerie Folk 2005-03-24 . chapter 3
¡Hola, AJ!

Even all the way in the GALAPAGOS i can review. Funny, ¿eh? (im typing on a funky spanish keyboard that I cant seem to figure out how to get apostrophes...) Im having a lot of fun right now and i mis you and everyone else a whole bunch...say hi to anyone on AIM for me...oh ps...I got to swim with sea lions...and ill tell you what ELSE I saw...later

now for the review...I LURVE IT! I think its great for a 1st/2nd/3rd grader...hehe...g2g...breakfast time...

Lurve,Lissa
Lily D'Arouet 2005-02-01 . chapter 1
oh my god. what the heck? you're such a freak...but i lavas j00 anyway!

(not a stalker...)

Queen of the Faerie Folk 2005-01-16 . chapter 1
bAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! THAT IS HILARIOUS AJ! ... hey! poetic parallelism was during MY first period eng. class wit the queen...bah...hehe...
Faithless Juliet 2005-01-12 . chapter 1
Intresting, very intresting.

Much love,Juliet.
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