I love this poem...er...song. (that'll teach me to read what category I'm in)

There's really not all that much for me to say about this. I can't really think of anything! I truly enjoyed it and there's so many interesting lines, phrases and meanings.

I did see one error (at least I think it's an error). It's in the third chorus. The line says "And it's be history repeating". It's a minor mistake, but it threw me out of the rhythm for a moment.

Anyways, a beautiful piece of work. Please continue writing!

~Delsie

Powerful and Passionate, I really love the way that you did this.Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.