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| MorbidTruth 2005-03-17 ch 1,  | abusewow...I feel it.. |
| Luneko 2005-03-16 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, sad, and depressed. Not in the sense of "woe is me, my life sucks" depressed, but as in medical condition depressed. Don't ask why cuz I don't know. I know this is a late review, but I know that I love seeing new reviews even if they are late. And I like to make people happy. Plus, I'm taking a look at all your works to see if I want to add you to my favorite authors. |
| myno 2005-01-22 ch 1, | abusethis deals with a subject that has long fascinated me- you may want to read my poem "Christmas" which also speaks of cutting as art. Good poem. |
| Eirien 2005-01-15 ch 1, | abuseHey - it's great to see you posting again! ^^ This poem is great, beautifully written and very sad. You explore the topic well, I like the way you incorporate many different undercurrents, such as the "if pain is bliss ..." passage. A haunting poem. |
| simpleplan13 2005-01-13 ch 1, | abusebeautiful descriptions and amazing job.. so true and beautifull expressed ::adds to favs:: |
| poetic abortion 2005-01-13 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful in the sad sense. Strikes me with so much hurt and pain. ~* Noelle O.O;V *~ |
| Anjeni Windsinger 2005-01-13 ch 1, | abuseSort of a macabre beauty in this. Intense wording, as usual, and the way you split your sentences were very, very well-done. Awesome, awesome poem! |