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| beti213 2005-03-17 ch 1,   | a maybe common incident related in an uncommon way... the last line calls for attention because it sticks out, but not in a bad way if you wish to make that line important. Beautiful poem. |
| DOORphrame 2005-01-12 ch 1, | Cool idea. I liked it. Keep writing. |
| Infinite Smiles 2005-01-12 ch 1, | Beautiful and perfect. |