   ShadesofBlue69 2006-01-06 . chapter 1lovley rymeing |
 That Name Goes Here 2005-04-26 . chapter 1Wow. I can almost imagine this being a rap song, can't you? Awsome! |
 Not Quite Dry Eyed 2005-04-17 . chapter 1wow another great one i really loved this one you have great expression i really like it. Keep writing 4 eva and always.
Scarred Heart |
 Infinity Plus One 2005-01-14 . chapter 1Wonderful contradictions in this poem. The imagery of ripping veins from the arm sounds absolutely wonderful. As for your unnatural obsessions, I know how it feels (music: Cannibal Corpse, Sepultura...Torture's always more interesting then death though.) You're on my author alert list. |
 ossining 2005-01-12 . chapter 1Wow, this is quite dark, but I like darkness. Interesting. |
 Faithless Juliet 2005-01-12 . chapter 1Dark, Deep, and well-detailed, you have a strong sense of voice in this, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet. |
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