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| Baozi 2005-01-23 ch 1,  | abuseWhoa, this is pretty cool. There are a few mistakes in homophones and some other things, but that doesn't take away from the story too much. Update soon. |
| DarkPharaoh1666 2005-01-13 ch 1, | abuseWonderful. I love this story, is there gonna be more? |
| Les Otho 2005-01-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is a clever little story, rather like 'Dragon's Flight'. But also, like that, occasional mistakes severely depress its readability (for example, confusion of tenses and homophones). |