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Reviews For: Twilight's Hour

Baozi
2005-01-23
ch 1,
abuseWhoa, this is pretty cool. There are a few mistakes in homophones and some other things, but that doesn't take away from the story too much. Update soon.
DarkPharaoh1666
2005-01-13
ch 1,
abuseWonderful. I love this story, is there gonna be more?
Les Otho
2005-01-13
ch 1,
abuseThis is a clever little story, rather like 'Dragon's Flight'. But also, like that, occasional mistakes severely depress its readability (for example, confusion of tenses and homophones).
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