Very nice, very nice. I always liked to look at deities from the 'other side,' so to speak. Everyone views the gods as being all-powerful and blessed and amazing, but how do they feel? How would it feel to go on endlessly, watching everyone and everything you could ever have loved just... falling to ruin? I think it would drive one insane.

Very well done. My only recommendation is to change the word "stuck." I don't know what you should change it TO, exactly, but something with less of a slang feel, I guess. It didn't quite fit. The repetition and rhyme fit wonderfully, though.

Keep it up!

So melancholy and beautifully written. I love ethereal poems.

I like this. It's an interesting way of looking at the mythological deity. I like your use of repetition too; it has a very nice overall effect. The only thing I would recommend is to work on your use of meter; it really adds a lot to the rhythm of a poem. Also I would make your rhymes more accurate if you can (rhyming by with sky instead of skies for instance.) Keep writing! :)