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| Amari 2007-08-08 ch 1, | Wow! I love this! I have felt like this too many a time before. Ah, I've got to check this as a favorites! ~remaining Amari |
| Olusenka 2005-04-20 ch 1, | No no no! You must keep writing! That poem successfully projected some of the saddest feelings I have read about. You pretty much made me shiver - it was that effective. And the rhyming scheme really does work well and the repetition is so suited to this poem. I can't believe I haven't read any of your poems earlier! |