Great!! Great job with the fist chapter!!

i really like it! cant wait till the next one!

WOSH YAY LONGER-NESS!No predicitable-ness, okay?! GO WITH LIKE...awesome unpredictable-ness! I know you can do it! WO!

Evie EvilVidel

That was awesome soon to be wife *_* ?

Ahem. -points to ebil cliffie- How /dare/ you. Just kidding, hun. You know I love you. And your writing. -poke- More. Now. I commandeth you. Or I'll get a certain NSDB after you. Mwahaha! ^_^

AWESOME AWESOMENESS...AWESOMESEMITY NESS WO!! Make them LONGER!

Evie

ACK! *falls off chair* Ouch *rubs head and sits back up* HOW COULD YOU LEAVE ME LIKE THAT! I WAS REALLY EAGER TO KNOEW MORE ABOUT THIS VINCENT GUY! *cat tails flicking angryly and cat ears back*PLEASE WRITE MORE!kk?BYE!MEOW!

awesome i like it update son please!

DUDE DID SHE DIE?! hahaha THE AWESOMENESS STILL LIVES!GO!

Evie

HEY it won't let me SIGN IN!! ANYWAY! AWESOMENESS OF A STORY DUDE! WO!CONTINUE ALWAYS! GO GO GO!^-^

Evie