   Cleopatra1 2005-10-09 . chapter 13Wow! This chapter was really really interesting! I feel so bad for Kilo though, hope he'll feel better soon. And Richie's separated from the group, at least he's unharmed!
And that's some way to end the chapter! It's a cliffhanger! Evvil! Update soon! |
 Pluto 2005-08-15 . chapter 1 Very intense Himico! Poor Sanga! :(Can't wait to read your next chapter!
vkl~ |
| Cleopatra1 2005-08-13 . chapter 12 Wow, you updated! This was a great chapter, interesting indeed! I wonder who that man at the end was too! I'm also glad that you stepped out of the writer's block! Congrats! ^^ |
 Keaira 2005-08-10 . chapter 12hope sanga doesnt get lost in the dungeon. one question, why does richie still have his sword? wouldn't the guards have taken it away?can't wait to see wat happens to them and find out where kilo and red are! |
| Keaira 2005-06-22 . chapter 11 ahh! cliffhanger! hope you'll update soon. |
| Keaira 2005-06-22 . chapter 10 i wanna kno wat all the fortune telling stuff means! good chapter! |
| Keaira 2005-06-22 . chapter 9 i thot u said this would be a boring chapter? lol. i guess their adventure is finally starting! |
| Keaira 2005-06-21 . chapter 8 aww...poor kilo. i liked this chapter...not really sure why. sanga kind of reminds me of tohru from fruits basket. |
| Keaira 2005-06-21 . chapter 7 srry i havent reviewed in a while. good chapter. *wonders wat happened to Sanga's brother* |
| ABP 2005-06-13 . chapter 11 dundundun... VERY good chapter! |
| Cleopatra1 2005-06-12 . chapter 11 Aww! That was a short chapter! TT_TT Wow, I can't believe they got caught! I wonder how Kilo and Red are doing, hopefully they're safe. Very interesting, and make the next chapter longer! XD |
 A B Lewis 2005-06-05 . chapter 10Woo! Another chapter! White wings... like an angel? Interesting... Update soon! |
| Cleopatra1 2005-05-29 . chapter 10 Ah~! You updated!! I'm so happy and this chapter was really good! Wow, every chapter is better than the last, you're good! ^^
I'm still lovin' Kilo, he's so cool! Oh and white wings...o0o0o0o interesting! I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^ |
| A B Lewis 2005-05-22 . chapter 9 Hm... that was a good chapter, not a bad one! But yeah, it was a bit weird how they accepted their fates so easily. Perhaps that was all a ploy, and they plan on revenge? Just an idea. but whatever, very good. cant wait till the next chapter! |
| Cleopatra1 2005-05-21 . chapter 9 AH!! OMG!! What an awesome chapter!! I love the way you ended it with Sanga being seen "against the rays of the sun", that was excellent. It's so sad because they have to leave their home. Aww..
Wow! Sanga's profile, woot! Hey, her b-day is one day before mine! ^_^
Well update soon again, this is so interesting!! |
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