Good story. I love the dialogue, everything feels authentic. Looking forward to all of your next chapters.

I forgot too say Bye! So,

Good work Pickle and keep it up! Bye bye!

Shiver me timbers, Land a'hoy! Okay thats enough of that, I was just getting ready for when they reach England. I've had a giant cookie! Nana, nana, nana none for Jhon. Okay that was mean, anywhoo, Go Lupin! See I can do it too, he's great I just love the character. Isabella eh? Is this going to be future Mrs. Lupin? We all he must of got married and knocked someone up otherwise they'd be no Finn Rock, Tell and so forth.

Well... I dunno what to say. I didn't come across any extra R's, although you successfully got me to read this before 10 PM. Good job! lol. And now you have JUST informed me that you found it.

Anyway, I really can't wait to see the next installment! These guys are totally getting into my mind, and I keep wanting to type Old English sounding phrases...

See ya!

Kiks

And the Lupin family stories begin...! Yay! I think you should try and pull a Louie L'Amour. That would be interesting, but undoubtably very difficult... But back to the story...

WOW! I've never seen you write in this style before! You're GOOD at old fashioned! And now I know where my Jamaica tip came in... Go me. I really like these characters. They're well developed and intriguing. Not to mention totally original.

I can't wait to read more of this!

Keira

Oh, and P.S.: I think Taurie might be right... There isn't TOO much violence, but I think it should probably be at least P.G. rated. Most G movies that I know of are like... Cinderella and Muppets Treasure Island. So, yeah... food for thought.

Well that was intressting, I like pirate stories so It should be good! I liked this chapter but there was too much dialogue, lotsa action made up for it though heh heh. Oh and I think you should bump the rating up, for teh violence. Yes, the coming to England too see me! JK.

Thanks!! My birthday prezzies are all coming in late this year so no worries! Only Rhett and Jan gave me them early anywhoo, I like this. Keep it up!