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| JuLez 2005-12-15 ch 6, anon. | abusehey! i lyk ur story a lot. plz update soon... |
| CherryTwister 2005-02-10 ch 6,  | abuseNice chapter. Update soon! |
| what's up world 2005-02-01 ch 6, | abusequite fast paced yet intruiging. it's really cool. it doesnt over analyze anything either. just tells it like it his. it think it's a really cool story! just some minor typos here and there. i think the whole cheerleading thing is used as a huge stereotype here...but punks and cheerleaders arent always shunned from each other. i guess maybe it was weird at my high school, but punks and cheerleaders actually hung out a lot. anyways, that's besides the point. great story! please update soON! |
| . 2005-01-30 ch 6, anon. | abusei like this story please update soon |
| BlackCat03 2005-01-30 ch 6, | abusenice, not bad, keep it going. miss reading your stuff, nice to see you starting up again babes |
| Liquid 2005-01-29 ch 6, anon. | abuseReally good, can't wait for more. |
| DragonFaeLynn 2005-01-29 ch 6, | abuseOh my gosh! This is such a cute story! I love it. I know you just updated today, but you should update another chapter... ^_^ |
| ruthy 2005-01-23 ch 5, anon. | abusetoo lazy to sign in |
| slightly-delusional 2005-01-22 ch 5, | abuseOMG! Are you ok? I hope you feel better! But anyways, great story! I love it so far!! |
| Spleeny 2005-01-22 ch 1, | abuseIt's pretty good, but your grammar and punctuation needs some work. You should have commas or periods at the end of your quotations, and you shouldn't say "your" when you mean "you are (you're)." Just being a grammar nazi, but anyway, keep writing! |
| Cate 2005-01-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseaww. get better! being hurt sucks |
| I'mRadYou'reRadLetsHug 2005-01-22 ch 5, | abusehope u weren't hurt to bad in the accident. great story. like it lotz. update wen u can! |
| diff-me 2005-01-22 ch 5, | abusewow this story has a pretty good plot, i like the way you write, looks like a poem/story hope you get better, sorry bout teh car accident, sounds awful.. |
| Cate 2005-01-21 ch 4, anon. | abuselove it! such a cute story |
| jesus! 2005-01-21 ch 4, anon. | abusehow snobby can a person get? so shes ot gonna stick up for him? pah! |