I think this is really beautiful. "My wind continues to blow,/Bringing with it tiny snowflakes that seem/To remind us of grudges, arguments,/And other things that we shouldn't be thinking about." I think that was my favorite part, although the whole thing is wonderful. I also really like how most of the poem's lines are longer, and then the last two lines are just 2 and 3 words...it really adds emphasis to the ending. Great job!