It's interesting. I'm not a fan of the capital letters, though. But experimentation is always good. It helps one to grow poetically.

Ah! I loved it! I love the form, too. The double-space thing actually works for it, unlike most poems. I like how you experimented with captial and lower-case letters...And the poem is so true...Keep writing...Please R&R some of my work as yours was definitly worth reading :)

Sadomasochistic love is always intriguing.