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| Brooke Monroe 2005-01-18 ch 1,  | abuseum. i like it a lot. it has a feeling that i can relate to. some parts seem like they don't belong. like the first line. and parts seem like they're missing words.'But if you’ve out of love,', like that part. but besides that i really do like it.Brooke Monroep.s. you don't except annonymous reviews, i just thouht yous hould know. you might like to change that. |