it's been awhile since ive read a cut haiku, i remember they were quite popular or they might still be for all i know, anywayz, a very thoughtful little poem here, i enjoyed it, muchly well done

For whatever reason, this really struck me... and i'm not sure why, but I liked it very much nevertheless.

Thanks SO MUCH for the review ^_^

wow, very well written. keep it up =0)

i feel stupid staring at the screen & trying to come up with something articulate to say.

just. beautiful. yeah. -incoherent-'black is just a shade of white'-- loved that line.

-lin

brilliant brilliant brilliant, lovely, as always. god I love your stuff, hooray for you writing haiku.

"black is just a shade of white"

right, vous etes incroyable. j'aime the whole thing beaucoup.

awesome piece. i love the format, with the combination of the haiku, spliced, and tanka. :) i especially like the ending and the line "black is just a shade of white" never thought of it that way before... insightful. great job. keep writing!

I liked the whole fairy-tale idea, as always, great work also. :). Good job!

Breath taking , the whole thing was so captivating. A great read from start to end. ^-^

~* Noelle O.O;V *~