Wow, very awesome! Keep going!

I think this story was well written, very descriptive. I think we need more writers like you on the site. I myself am a writer and have at the moment two stories displayed. Please review them if possible.

Wow! That was some powerful writing! I really liked it; loved the descriptions of life on the mean streets. The dialogue is sharp and realistic, which is something that is often sadly lacking on this site. Congratulations!