HelloI like this poem very much as well. It has a good interchange of rhythm and it expresses things in a very clear mannor...and it has a cute/funny/demented ending in which i love. ^_^ Yay for cool dememented-cute-endings. ^_^ Good work.Bye for now!~Zeheria

aww man! that was great! i love it! Vamps! Great job! thanx for the review!=) smilingface

OOH...dark me likey! it go on my favorites ^_^ Happy Easter!!

Talk about an apostle! The literally contageous religion...l I like your phrasing.

I think it's quite amusing, the vampire seems to posses an arrogance. A superior to the fledgling, making them wait to transform. Very good job.

Oh! (shiver) That was a very good poem. It sound like a vampire talking to its newly converted victim. Please write others like this one.

Wow, you really capture a vampire well in this poem-I really like it.