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Reviews For: Make Me Something Beautiful
Katrina Gabrielle 2005-12-31 . chapter 1
I feel like someone is speaking these words, soft and wonderful. It's an eloquent poem with grace and love and hope... *sighs* simply beautiful.
without the sun im silent 2005-11-19 . chapter 1
this is beautiful...it's one of my favorites and it's going in my favorite stories list. i wish i had someone like this...farewell for now please continue your beautiful work...keep it up.
avidelecteur 2005-09-10 . chapter 1
That's so sweet!
breezy nostrils 2005-01-31 . chapter 1
A nice change to read something sappy. I really do like sappy poetry. Great job!
Twilit Exaggerance 2005-01-28 . chapter 1
"like the tunes you carry in your heart"nice line. The lines coulda been engraved there, but thats all. this is really good.
simpleplan13 2005-01-27 . chapter 1
very nice.. I liek the last line
ufpncc1966 2005-01-22 . chapter 1
Minor nitpick: "hear" should be "heard" near the end of the piece.

I like it, the poem(to me) has a dreamlike quality about it which meanders along(not the word I'm looking for, but can't think of any better at the moment) between subjects, that is, vase, butterfly, necklace, piano, etc. This is, of course, not a criticism; the transitions are handled nicely.

I'm not sure I understand it fully- but love it all the same.
Silent Star4 2005-01-16 . chapter 1
Sounds like the perfect guy that all of us would like, doesn't it? Another nicely written poem, but I did find a grammatical mistake. Other than that,very nice.
pennydeath 2005-01-16 . chapter 1
I like it.
mapofyourhead 2005-01-15 . chapter 1
pretty! "I love you this much and all the way to the moon"^_^ i like!
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