 Katrina Gabrielle 2005-12-31 . chapter 1I feel like someone is speaking these words, soft and wonderful. It's an eloquent poem with grace and love and hope... *sighs* simply beautiful. |
 without the sun im silent 2005-11-19 . chapter 1this is beautiful...it's one of my favorites and it's going in my favorite stories list. i wish i had someone like this...farewell for now please continue your beautiful work...keep it up. |
 avidelecteur 2005-09-10 . chapter 1That's so sweet! |
 breezy nostrils 2005-01-31 . chapter 1A nice change to read something sappy. I really do like sappy poetry. Great job! |
 Twilit Exaggerance 2005-01-28 . chapter 1"like the tunes you carry in your heart"nice line. The lines coulda been engraved there, but thats all. this is really good. |
 simpleplan13 2005-01-27 . chapter 1very nice.. I liek the last line |
 ufpncc1966 2005-01-22 . chapter 1Minor nitpick: "hear" should be "heard" near the end of the piece.
I like it, the poem(to me) has a dreamlike quality about it which meanders along(not the word I'm looking for, but can't think of any better at the moment) between subjects, that is, vase, butterfly, necklace, piano, etc. This is, of course, not a criticism; the transitions are handled nicely.
I'm not sure I understand it fully- but love it all the same. |
 Silent Star4 2005-01-16 . chapter 1Sounds like the perfect guy that all of us would like, doesn't it? Another nicely written poem, but I did find a grammatical mistake. Other than that,very nice. |
 pennydeath 2005-01-16 . chapter 1I like it. |
 mapofyourhead 2005-01-15 . chapter 1pretty! "I love you this much and all the way to the moon"^_^ i like! |