Reminds me of a dear friend-this piece is beautiful.

How, very sad and the tragic thing with this. Is that I can see a lot of people feeling this way to.

Awesome. the two poems really compliment each other.

Lime

I really loved that. I love how you described it, 'distasteful puff' that's a really nice way of putting it.

Awesome. I like the viewpoint of this.

Beautiful. Like song lyrics. Kinda reminds me of Bright Eyes, "Lover I don't have to love"...(shrugs).

I liked your bio, and the part you said about bisexuality. Cool. Hmm. Doesn't that clash with Catholicism, though?

Both poems are marvellous. I like the reference to smoking - i myself never really took it up, yet can't seem to bring myself away from that...intoxicating tobacco. But both of these are really well written... you are a fantastic poet!

lovely. at first, I didnt like the word "puff" there, though I cant thnk of another one to replace it with. however, upon rereading, I change my mind XD I like it all the more.

lovely. very sad.

wow.. so sad and true... beautiful

I love this! you should review some of my stuff. I'd love to have an artist like you review my work!

*Whistles* Very well expressed. God I love reading and these two poems are reasons why. Greatness!

This is a very good poem, or let's say, poemS. I like the way that you have separated this post into two poems and that you balance the two points of view. Well done.

Hey, very nice. Loving your poems more and more each time. keep it

Really good poem... your poems are awesome!