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ThisCut-UpAngel 7/31/05 . chapter 2Reminds me of a dear friend-this piece is beautiful. |
Moonjava 5/14/05 . chapter 2How, very sad and the tragic thing with this. Is that I can see a lot of people feeling this way to. |
katmonkey 5/4/05 . chapter 2Awesome. the two poems really compliment each other. Lime |
twistedtruths 5/1/05 . chapter 2I really loved that. I love how you described it, 'distasteful puff' that's a really nice way of putting it. |
addie pray 5/1/05 . chapter 2Awesome. I like the viewpoint of this. |
addie pray 5/1/05 . chapter 1Beautiful. Like song lyrics. Kinda reminds me of Bright Eyes, "Lover I don't have to love"...(shrugs). I liked your bio, and the part you said about bisexuality. Cool. Hmm. Doesn't that clash with Catholicism, though? |
this is my love for you 4/30/05 . chapter 2Both poems are marvellous. I like the reference to smoking - i myself never really took it up, yet can't seem to bring myself away from that...intoxicating tobacco. But both of these are really well written... you are a fantastic poet! |
Written 4/30/05 . chapter 2lovely. at first, I didnt like the word "puff" there, though I cant thnk of another one to replace it with. however, upon rereading, I change my mind XD I like it all the more. |
Written 4/30/05 . chapter 1lovely. very sad. |
simpleplan13 4/30/05 . chapter 2wow.. so sad and true... beautiful |
Simply Britni 4/28/05 . chapter 1I love this! you should review some of my stuff. I'd love to have an artist like you review my work! |
Out-Of-Reality 4/19/05 . chapter 1*Whistles* Very well expressed. God I love reading and these two poems are reasons why. Greatness! |
Infinity Plus One 1/29/05 . chapter 1This is a very good poem, or let's say, poemS. I like the way that you have separated this post into two poems and that you balance the two points of view. Well done. |
Shinji Boi69 1/16/05 . chapter 1Hey, very nice. Loving your poems more and more each time. keep it |
Mydnight Dancer 1/16/05 . chapter 1Really good poem... your poems are awesome! |