the Holocaust...hehe. Touchy subject, really. I'm Jewish reformed, but this was a beautiful poem. I've often thought of writing a poem about it, but never got hte chance. You captured the mood perfectly. I think that a captive's thoughts at one point probably were something like that. Great job, I loved the imagery.

This poem is truely amazing! well done! It is a very powerfully written poem.

I don't know what to say other than that was beautiful! It flows very well and has a powerful message! Nice job!

That poem was ausomI've just gotten into the Holocost. Don't know why, probably because a friend of mine has gotten into it. I think that it's a cool subject, I mean war isn't cool, but it's interesting to learn about the holocost. What if a natsy general was totally against the war? That would be cool to write about. I know that it happened. I'm writing a story about that, so I'll post it when it's done. Anyways, that poem was so rhythmic, and had a good feeling to it.