This is the first time I've read a believable female vampire/male mortal fic without the the girl being some stupid little depressing whiney-baby. You have got to write more!

wow...there are a lot of stories about vampires on this site, and so far I haven't read one that drew me in as much as yours did. it completely captivated my attention...and went so far as to make me feel as though i were in the room too, watching the whole story unfold. the ending is perfect--dramatic but subtle. i loved it!

wow, that was so good, i loved it.

I like it! Its really cool!