This has a great rhythm to it. Not only that, but the rhyming was great...it was subtle enough that I barely even noticed it! And that's how you know it's good...I hate it when poems sound liek they're being forced to rhyme. Anyways, great work!

~Daphne~

kool poem. it was really deep, which is probly why i didnt understand some of it...lol im slow. but theres only one line that i didnt like "Know the pain and sorrow and regrets". instead of using "and" after pain, use a comma. it sounds better and the line isnt as long or as out of place. good message from the poem though and overall great job! keep it up, Dreamer!

~BeautifulEcho~