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Reviews For: Nothing Fails Like A Good Prayer

FuZz ZuRiFf
2005-06-29
ch 1,
abusegod be exitsing man. he gonna poonish chu. i will cut of you bloody ** and feed to you piece by bloody ** pieces. you ignorant father**er/
relying on youth
2005-06-25
ch 1,
abuseHey, I totally understand what you're talking about in this poem, you are great at things like this, ranting, ha! you should see mine.

Dude, it's called self esteem, just on a reply to your review of my poem. I used to think I sucked to, until I became a bisexual geek who wears vintage clothes and listens to Marylyn Manson and the Shins simontaniously (or however you spell that),
daphnegray78
2005-04-07
ch 1,
abuseThis poem is great. There were a couple of spelling mistakes, but grammar and such does not matter in a poem this good. Well done. I give you kudos.

~Daphne~
AntiPleasure
2005-01-23
ch 1,
abuse*eyes fall on the floor* wow, you just made my creative streak jump out of the window =p lol if only I can piece thoughts together like this, as you do. Well done.

Jenna xoxo
MaxxRidarr
2005-01-22
ch 1,
abuseNothing fails like a good piece of ** out of your **, mouth or any other hole in your pitiful body demonic whores would love to use to fornicate with. Enjoy that in Hell you athiest scum.
theCoffeeEnzyme
2005-01-18
ch 1,
abusewow, this one like, blew my mind. some of the lines in here are incredible and the message is awesome. you are an amazing writer.
Eboniccinderella
2005-01-17
ch 1,
abuseHm...you're just a *little* bit obsessed aren't ya?People don't even follow rockstars the way you go on about God.
Leash'd
2005-01-16
ch 1,
abuseI'm the person who reviewd from your other work.

Quote: "I did write a disclaimer.

The only way people knew this wasn't mine was because of the disclaimer.

How dare you accuse me of plagerism, bastard."

Where is your disclaimer? I don't see it. Is it invisible?
Cthulhu
2005-01-16
ch 1,
abuseWow, meet John Stein, he tells YOU what YOU beleive!

As for the poem, angain, it makes me feel inferior. As for suggestions, perhaps another look through and polish but this isn't really THAT necessary, great job.
John Stein PhD
2005-01-15
ch 1,
abuse"Many people tell me I must believe in God to be this angry at him, I'm angry at him for not existing"

No. You believe in him. You're just mad because you didn't get that pony you wanted when you were little.
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