I love the rhyming and word choice. A sort of hopeless feeling mixed with anger.. awesome.

Aw, Mudds, that's sad. It's pretty, though, I like it ^_^.

Yay for updates!

xWooflesx

omg! It's so pretty! ::glomps::

wow, this is really good. i try to write stuff like this but it always comes out like crap. lol. the emotion is so strong in this and it made me wanna cry when i read it.

A room changing over time, a person clinging to something that isn't there... I dunno, thats wot I got out of it. I like this one.