|Reviews for Smeared Purity|
| less-than-imperfect 1/27/05 . chapter 1
... i can't think of much right now but i'll think up of a good comeback... sooner or later.
| firemounrain 1/15/05 . chapter 1
You don't make your situation very clear to the reader. I actually like your summary better than the poem, and I really can't tell where they're connected.