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| slave to the voices 2005-02-07 ch 1,   | This is a well written piece with an interesting point of view. I also enjoy some of the grafitti that I see. Nice work, keep writing. **Slave**Thanks for the review of My Hell |
| in the circus 2005-01-16 ch 1, | Excellent. I hear such a strong character voice in this piece. I really enjoyed the little details of uncertainty--the sometimes's, the maybe's, and the "in some ways". It really emphasized the purity of the narrator's amazement in the end. |
| Willow Woman 2005-01-16 ch 1, | Woah. That was great. When I got to the part about how the community is going to paint over all the art, my stomach literally clenched. Kudos! ~The Willow~ |
| Stories-have-souls 2005-01-16 ch 1, | Wow, that is a captivating story, very well written. |