creepy and subtly beautiful. I love this one.

Nice work, it does have a intense feel to it as if she's hyping herself up. I've been meaning to start reading Gothina, so many things keep happening. I'll be sure to start as soon as I can. Nice poem by the way. I like vampire fics though I'm really picky about them, mainly because many people make them so rediculous.

OH! I like it much! The repetition really works well for this. w00t-ness!

This poem sums April up. it does have rythme. It has great rythme. This is a good idea, make people wanna read Gothina. Which you need to post part 2 of chap 26 soon or I will go nuts...lol

I like this a lot. And, poems dont have to rhyme to be good. infact, its called freestyle. Great job.

-firehair

This really goes with your story, especially the 'my mind is hating' part. Although the part about drawing fangs makes sense too,(of course!). By the way, you haven't updated in FOREVER! V. sad. I think I'm going to cry...sniff. Blessed Be!(and update!)

You portrayed a vampire in the most extreme way. It was just brilliant. Simple, passionate and real. Greatness!

Hey, nice one. Anyway, check out this dood. Werewolf Dreamwalker. he's in my fav authors list. he's really great in story telling. I learned a thing or two fro him on stories and poems. maybe you could improve your status eh? Bye for now!

oh! I like it!

Kool i like it nice promotion technique heh heh. anyway poems dont have to ryhme i almost hate it when they do i dunno anyway nice promotionalsee ya im off aalagi-san

Wow. That was definetly in Aprils (or Demonica's) character. Terriffic as always.

Wow, this poem was v. simple but it's outstanding. It goes through the past, present and future yet all in the present tense giving the reader the feeling of being there as it happens. It's really very well done :D

i loved that poem.. it is good...

Wow. Awesome poem! You capture the character very well. Keep writing!

-Dathomiran