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| Infinite Abyss 2005-06-20 ch 1,  | abuseThis is interesting. There are a few gramatical and spelling errors but overall, the story's pretty good. Also, I notice it's been a while since you posted this. I hope you haven't abandoned this story. It has a lot of potential. You should update it. Anyway, keep up the good work. |
| Tzao 2005-01-16 ch 1, | abuseWow, I like it. Interesting story line so far, I like it. It's original. (:Cheers.--t |