Short and poignant. As you know, this peom had me in tears, and anyone who has been through anything similar would feel the same as ur pain is so clear and easy to identify with. For others it is a whisper of our worst fears. One of my favourite pieces of your work Dark Rose

This is so beautiful...I can't think of anything else to say...

Beautiful poem. *hugs you*

Absolutely beautiful! I'm vey sorry for your loss. Keep writing you have talent. Feel free to read any poems that i have written.