Another gr8 one!(2 lazy 2 write my name)

Sean is jelouse, you write so well!

I can pretty much say that, that is a long despcription of being Bi...COOL!I love the cloven attraction line...its krunk! HOw long haven't I used that word?

NeSsA

Good poem. Reminds me of a train-of-thought writing, except this is broken into line/poem form.

By the way, you know that cleave can mean either to "cling to," as in "cleave to", or break away from," as in "cleave apart," or "cloven from."

So, that in mind, g'job! Kudos!

-PTG

*blows raspberry* nope, i am NOT telling u what my poem is about UNTIL you write a poem that ACTUALLY expresses HOW YOU FEEL...*cough*if you DO.. *cough* J/K...but i will once u do that! Now, Lilah has LEFT the building!

PS- OR is it Lilah has RIGHT the building?

PSS- Nice Job on the poem...regardless of the facts.

Neat, it's really pretty. Your poems rock. I love your style. Please please PLEASE R&R my fic 'Alandra'.

Bye

Nice poem, Jake! I really like, and it flows well too. I like the imagery. Good job, keep writing!

sexy imagery! i really like this, it's exquisite! :)

i like it keep writing amanda

Beautiful poem...wonderful descriptions, nice flow, and above all deep emotion...loving it! Don't stop writing -

Sumi-chan; A whisper in the wind, my love...

Nice flow and really good poem. _ Well done !

* Noelle *

That was beautiful! it says so much. It describes the person as much as an abstract image. this poem has so many angles to see

Nice poem, Jake, Good flow. :)

-Rach.