I really like this one. It was very powerful. I felt like I was holding my breath the whole time. Just one point though, you tend to mix up "then" and "than." I noticed it in another one or two of your writings. In this one, it was the line - "...as he hugged her, than putting her head against his neck she would say, 'Kiss me again.'" Just make sure you note that for the future.

I'm speechless. Wow, did that have an impact on me. You prove a very good point. Nearly everyone is digusted at student/teacher realationships, saying they are wrong and terrible on the teacher's part. While some indeed are, people don't realize exactly what you said: Love has no age limits.

Incredible. I applaud loudly.

~Ana

I have no problem with Teacher/Student relationships , but in truth I didn't like this. The whole thing seemed rushed , the plot was unsual and the part were he kills the boy left me unsatidfied.

!~* Noelle; With love somes pain. *~!

um, ok, she loves an older man, gets blackmailed by some boy who sexually assaults her and gets killed, runs away, and lives happily ever after. interesting. unusual plot, but i like ur style, so keep it up.

i coulda sworn i reviewed on this story! maybe the comp froze before hand... i dunno... but this is very well written and good... although to tell you the truth i really dont like student/teacher relations... they gross me out... but this was veryy good.

thank you for the review by the way!

Hey, i really like your story. It's kind of, i donno, morbidly fascinating. Well im think im gonna go read your other story now.

it was kind of weird how he KILLED the boy...i think thats a little bit of a stretch but actually this happened three times at my school. (which was publicized nationally) and i know two of the girls who had an affair with my teacher. kinda sick cuz he was in his 40s and had kids. i actually have a HUGE crush on this intern social worker OMG HES SO HOT hes 23 and so fine! but damn, hes leaving. haha and plus i wouldnt be goin around and having affair with people working at my school. thats sick. BUT its my opinion.