Reviews for Shattered: Indiscriminate Creatures

Reviews For: Shattered: Indiscriminate Creatures - Reviews: Page 1 of 10

jazz from camp 2006-01-29 ch 18, anon.	abusethats really good, i havnt read it in awhile, so it was good to catch up. Sorry about the alicia joel person. I disagree, i think its funky and interesting. neway, email me or leave me a reponse. Jazzee from camp @ spring break
octobertears 2006-01-19 ch 18,	abuseAH! Another chapter at last! I don't even know how long I waited for it! It was short but it met my expectations. It's about time someone in the story decided to leave that hellhole ;) I love it.
Playwright08 2006-01-01 ch 18,	abusei love this story, its so unique. are you sure Gryphon will get over Sammy? it seems as if they were made for each other. they really need each other. please keep going, you're doing such a great job. :)
carmartia 2005-11-24 ch 18,	abusei like your story =D been reading and following along for a while but havent reviewed since i forgot the pw to my ID D= but here i am now! good job =D
zakei 2005-11-19 ch 18,	abusela la HAA! you took positively FOREVER to write this chapter! and im taking positively FOREVER to write my own chapter! but it dosent matter. this chapter seems rather random to say the least, and sam sounds like shes on drugs haha. so where does she go? what does she do? dont make this another shyt story man. please. actually if you give it a shyt ending it'll be fresh but i dont like shyt endings. lol. up to you haha. and for your review for my chapter, i'll also say thats part of my style? i wont really be heeding your review but i can try. a bit. lol. thats random, but ill continue reviewing ur story. so sergio loves zakei and zakei loves sergio too, dosent he? :D i mean seeing from previous chapters.. and if sammy is now ** free what does she become? what CAN she become? : < gryphon shouldnt chuck his sister aside. thats just plain mean. look, she actually cared for him and visited him and even loved him and all... HOW CAN HE JUST PUSH HER ASIDE. and sammys actually quite naieve to get all depresed and rubbishy over her brother's rejection. not like she cant try again another day.. i mean whys she suddenly so brittle? o_0 ok ive ranted alot, this review will end here dear. thanks again for shattered!! muak
carma 2005-11-17 ch 18, anon.	abusei love this story! ive been reading and following it for the longest time ever and this is probably my first or second review! great job girl
Bonniez 2005-11-16 ch 18, anon.	abuseLolz to ur reply to the flamer (or wutever ppl call them on original ficiton sites)N e wayz...I've been following along with ur story for the longest time now and I don't think I've ever reviewed. Your writing style has remained the same in I think overall technique but improved so that that its more clear. I luv it. Its simple, real, and to the point. I was disappointed for a minute becuz I thought that was the end of the story...but nope just another good chapter. I'll keep a look out for the sequell, becuz I have to say that Zakei is one of my FAVORITE characters in this story you've created here. Him and Thaniel. Well update agian soon. Laterz.BoNnIeZ aLiVe
Rachel 2005-11-14 ch 18, anon.	abuseu need a sequel on sammy. aw.. this makes me sad. u need to update faster. please. i
WarriorHeart 2005-11-13 ch 18,	abusevery interested to see how you do end it.
BlueAki 2005-11-13 ch 18,	abuseOMG! WHY? I'm so mad right now. Why did you make Gryphon kill his dad and become a murderer? Why did you make him not wanna see Sammy any more? Why did you make Sammy leave? Is she going to go back to them? Why is everytone taking it so calmly that she's leaving and never coming back? What made her suddenly feel this way? I have so many questions and this was very confusing, but im still mad. Why did she have to leave?
gonnabefamous 2005-11-12 ch 18, anon.	abusewow I hate you! Lol not really, I like your story it has character. Great job waiting for more.
Hailz 2005-11-03 ch 17, anon.	abuseHiya. Been trying to get ahold of you for so long, sorry I had to use the review thing.PLease contact me soon. Miss you lots.
alicia joel 2005-10-16 ch 17, anon.	abuseomg, could you BE hiding more hidden lust? havn't you ever heard of spellcheck? and one more thing before i go blow my brains out...WHO THE HELL CARES WHAT KIND OF TOOTHPASTE THE GUY USES?this is the worst ** that you've put on this site, and I must say, IT IS SO FREAKING MESSED UP. what is with all this crap? its like a frekaing soap, like whats going to happen next, the lez is going 2 get married 2 the druggie? I don't know who you play in this, but i don't really care. YOU ARE SICK.
bitterfly 2005-10-14 ch 17, anon.	abuseAbsolutely wonderful. Chapter 16 would have made a perfect ending, but I'm pretty sure you would have outraged fans flooding your inbox. This is one of the deepest stories I've read in a while, and I love how you use what may seem like pointless smut to convey the very real and very powerful emotions of the characters. You are a beautiful writer...never get discouraged!
lspeakl 2005-10-09 ch 17, anon.	abuselalahas! i like sergio. AND zakei. ESPECIALLY zakei. AND i LOVED the wet dream. are you like in a horny mood? all your stories are so... o_0 r(a). hahas. not that im allergic to it or anything. its nice from you. ^_^ i think the bathroom scene was rather.. ... yeah. it was '...' (if you didnt cath it..) but i guess it just enhances sergio's sergio-ness. I mean, if i were zakei, i would be like, 'HELL, JUST GET ON WITH IT!' instead of like, erm, responding meekly and stuff. probably the embarrassing wet dream thing. XD i still wish it was zakei's wildness. haha. it was la, in the end. >< the ambulance was so.. touching, and rather.. sweet. yupyup. its almost like he admitted his love for sam. and the nurses were well, nursey. in a kind of sitcom manner? i want gryphon to live, okay?! i dont mind spoilers, but gryphons lives!! RIGHT?!?!?! teary and how did he become a murderer? you mean his dad died from a kick? o_0;; explain? and i loved gryphons sweet nothings.

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