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noneedtoknow 2008-01-20 ch 1, anon.	abusei love it! i can totally relate. wait...no i can't. i'm running from reality
EnigmaticArsenic 2006-08-14 ch 1,	abuseoh, i like this. feels like a dream that's so good, it's a nightmare because everyone is smiling and you can't figure out why. thanks for the review, by the way.
Slideshow 2006-06-03 ch 1,	abuseSymbolic.I loved it. Some verses and wording were a little awkward, but you dont really focus on it because the idea of the entire piece is so riveting.Poor Alice, but good job.Its nice to look at Wonderland from the other side.Keep it up. This poem is fantastic.
! 2006-01-01 ch 1, anon.	abusehey, my name is alice!
False Advertisement 2005-08-24 ch 1,	abuseGosh, I love this. It's amazing. I don't know how to explain it. You do it SO FREAKING WELL. I can't even quote a favourite line because I love them all. Favourites list? Definitely. -Katelyn
Storm of Fire 2005-08-16 ch 1,	abuseWow. that's cool. :p
azzizarukas 2005-08-13 ch 1, anon.	abusei honestly think this is one of the best poems i have ever read.usually, i dont bother to read them, but this one is so good, i've already read it a couple times and finally decided to review now...:-Dwell, keep writing, ur great at it! happy un-birthday, this is ur tenth review for A L I C E
bigbaddaboom 2005-05-18 ch 1,	abuselol at the end there i had a voice in my head go "Please donate" i was like, "Wah?!" then .."Oh right" and embarassed @_@anyways the poem.IT WAS BLOODY FANTASTIC.i liked the way you wernt just picking a radomname for a poem and you used the concept of wonderland and escape, it worked well and i curse you for thinking it up! and i bless you to in the future of publishing! woot!
Grape 2005-02-15 ch 1,	abuseThat's true, most people run from reality before they can face it. This is a really good poem, I like how you manuipulate the words so it fits both Alice, and everyone else.. Its great.
Infinite Smiles 2005-02-02 ch 1,	abuseI absolutely loved this. The whole idea behind this was genius. ANd of course I remember you, silly! I remember that your name was the one that gave me the most trouble with all those x's and z's and y's for the acrostic poem.
SilentRiver 2005-01-30 ch 1,	abuseGood, for a second I thought Please Review was part of the poem and that confused me until I got it so I am reviewing good
nimerin 2005-01-20 ch 1,	abuseHey!This was an awesome poem; I just wanted to add that if you ever tweaked it a bit, it would make an awesome song. Nimerin
Grace 2005-01-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseA true treasure of a poem. The aftertaste it leaves you with is fantastic – very relaxed, but at the same time it keeps the mystery and confusion of Wonderland. Excellent job.
Orient Fox 2005-01-16 ch 1,	abuseOMG! This is VERY good! I like the message it sends! The rhythm's uneven but that's what makes this poem so unique and different from the rest of the poems. It's interesting to hear parts from Alice in Wonderland being alluded to! lol! Thanks for reviewing! Yea, lol, I felt inspired and decided to start writing it again. Does it really sound better? YAY! jumps up and down Was it interesting and did it fit in with the story? I mean, I'm kind of out of it lately...midterms and all. lol! Yup, I based the science project on my latest set of bio woes (AH! Dissecting cats?) ^_^ Thought it'd be fitting to put Alli through the same torture...lol! says just kidding as Alli starts glaring at Grace Anyways, great poem! And happy updating! much luv, grace Orient Fox
Walking Solutions 2005-01-16 ch 1,	abuseHey! Oh, wow, I love your poem. It's so...so...wow. Okay, sorry. I'll shut up now. But your poem really is ingenius and thoughtful and well-writtin and all that stuff. I'm so jealous. I suck at writing poems.

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