hihi!!

this is the update you were talking about, right? it must be...i see updates.

so bea is erin, you are evilyn (obviously) and ...lena is ria? anyway. good job!

oh one thing i caught. is cleo HAZEL-EYED or BLUE-EYED? check both descriptions in the story.

see ya!aj

Hmm... Rather good, though you definitely need a beta (possibly even a gamma!). May I offer my editing abilities?

Shaddup. I know I already beta-ed the chapter. So why in the name of flaming Kandor isn't it up yet?

Please update soon. I want my Tony fix!

Blessed be, Lily

Please make a second chapter! You did so well with this! Very detailed and well thought out. If you have a chance can you check out my story Sword of the rightful hand

O... very nice start! I can tell this is gonna be good! Please update ASAP!

nioce story, the ending is really cool and the good work should continue to keep up

woo it's the prologue! fun.

yeah uh...good ending, i helped you choose it. awesome.

thnx for leaving me out of the bio again...but this time isn't that important. after all, it's a silly poem. hehe.

see ya

I love that part of history with Cleopatra, Marc Antony, Brutus, and Cesear (all around the same time) . . . this was short, but I liked it. No big errors, it made sense and wasn't infeasible. I liked it and hopefully there's more . . . good work