Pretty cool, more elaboration please, it could be a mother killing her baby, two lovers killing each other or dozens of other combinations. But good job.
I like the way you italicize certain words, it really adds to the emphasis. The way you used imagery sparingly made it all the more potent when you did. (Sorry, I have a hard time with description and therefore take it upon myself to pay close attention to other's.)All in all, well done!
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