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| xxbstarwxx 2006-02-04 ch 1, | strange but kool |
| The Magician (Joseph 2005-01-17 ch 1, | Pretty cool, more elaboration please, it could be a mother killing her baby, two lovers killing each other or dozens of other combinations. But good job. The Magician |
| Willow Woman 2005-01-16 ch 1, | I like the way you italicize certain words, it really adds to the emphasis. The way you used imagery sparingly made it all the more potent when you did. (Sorry, I have a hard time with description and therefore take it upon myself to pay close attention to other's.)All in all, well done! ~The Willow~ |
| Tk.T 2005-01-16 ch 1, | Weird-o! That's all I have to say. Very dark, but cool as hell. Kudos for you, buddy. Happy writing! Tk.T~ |