Aww..this poem was so sad yet so happy...just how strongly the narrator in the poem loved their significant other was beautiful..especially how at the end they said if they made them smile their life was complete..and that they'd love them even after they were gone...I also loved how you talked about "sweet lies you loved to hear" and a "desperate kiss" I loved it all :) keep writing!

Desperation, love and saddness in one. It's good rhyming and it tells a nice, deep story, the only negative thing i might have to say is it drags on a bit. I can't talk, almost every one of my poems do that, but that's all the bad things i have to say. Nice work.

P.S. I am a Freak. I like being a Freak - no, I LOVE being a Freak. It's the greatest feeling in the world. If anyone tried to take my Freakishness away from me, I would die within a heartbeat, no questions there. Thanks for the reviews.

beautifully done.. very powerful

I liked the part "The purity in me faded, As my love for you had grown" The loss of innocence is very well applied. Good work.

wow. that was deep. and beautiful. it held me till the last word.

The emotions are so raw, sad and yet a few happy ones. I like the description, definately helpful to portray the emotions.Keep it up!!

all I have to say is "Wow!" :)

Sad but sweet. (sigh) Such things, such things. I don't know really what to say - I've been watching anime for the last five hours so I have a great set of emotions floating in me. But I did like it, yep, me most definetily (one day I'll learn how to spell that damn word) likies.

And this one... I like even more, heh. Great meaning, in my opinion.

Long for a poem lol, but that just meant there was more good writing to read. You never cease to impress me, I really enjoied this one. Great use of imagery, great flow, pretty good job overall. Keep it up