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Reviews For: Compassionate Kiss part 2
paigeturner15 2005-01-18 . chapter 1
Gr8t werk! It would b cool if you filled out your story with more details. I want 2 b able 2 visulize liz, emma, steve in my hed. Keep writing! What hapnz next?
freetofly 2005-01-17 . chapter 1
hehe...good job. I like it.
mizu no kokoro 2005-01-16 . chapter 1
aw... ^^ fantasies about the person you have a crush on~~ Haa~~ I realte, yes yes~Keep writing!
Squandy 2005-01-16 . chapter 1
This is a very good story, Lisa. I'm very proud of you.
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