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| Slowly Sinking 2005-06-15 ch 1,  | abuseThe rhyme doesn't really work at the end, but otherwise this is a great poem, I love the little details with the people the narrator helps. Good work! |
| WarriorHeart 2005-04-04 ch 1, | abusevery well said. I like the stories about the amn and woman you included. |
| fadedrainbows 2005-02-07 ch 1, | abuseOh this is so so so wonderful! I really enjoyed this one, and the beat was perfect! The rhymes are awesome and it flows wonderfully. My only question is who is talking and to whom? I'm assuming the person talking is a social worker? That is what they do, help people. I may be wrong, though. If you get a chance could you email me the answer to my question? my email is: fadedrainbows828@yahoo.com Thank you and Bravo! ~*~Faded~*~ |
| Toast n Guitars 2005-01-29 ch 1, | abuseNeat :) Keep writing -Toast |
| AllyCred 2005-01-26 ch 1, | abusevery nice...it flows beautifully...the stories told in this are great...really enjoyed reading this. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
| putz-6 2005-01-26 ch 1, | abusethis is a really good poem ^_^ |
| Shinji Boi69 2005-01-18 ch 1, | abuseWoah. I just loved how you ended it. Great job. Really good.~shinji |
| hocsll 2005-01-18 ch 1, | abuseamazing...you managed to sustain the rhythm for such a long time...and the poem's really very encouraging also! |
| LunasLight 2005-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing. You're a gifted poet. Very deep! ~6!~ |
| Arsenic336 2005-01-17 ch 1, | abuseA similar thing happened to one of my best friends. This is lovely work! THanks for your review! |