Aw please write more of this story! It's getting really interesting and I'm already in love and hooked onto it! I love your stories already and I really can't wait to read more!
PLEASE COME BACK!

Oh, dear lord, Deena, your stories always make me bust guts laughing.

I really enjoyed the three chapters of this, especially the second. I laughed so hard at the image of Auntie Swaroopakuntala and Ogilvy tackling Damian and beating him up, haha. That was amazing.

And then it ended. I really want to know what happens with this, 'cause I think it'd be just amazing: not only is it well-written, but it contains my favourite: fantasy creatures! Is seven years too late to ask for another chapter?

Thanks for the read,

- A.

PLEAAAAAASE tell me you will continue this. If you don't i'll possibly perish. Swear to god. You can't just keep me hanging like this, I'm not above whining ;)

I 3 this story! Its really well written, and I can't wait for the next chapter :)

This is a really good story! What was in the vial by the way?

more..more!

fuck yeah ..luv the charactersand the hot ass action...mm ...more

Will we ever know what was in that vial? ;w;

OMFG! WRITE MORE PLEASE! Wow, only three chapters and I'm hooked. Also, Canadians are amazing, stupid America. I hate living in California, it's falling to ruin. Especially Indians too, I have a lot of different Indian blood, and the only one I know for sure is Cherokee. Anyhoodles, please write more so that I have something to think about other than homework and the downfall of America. I think I may move to New Zealand, or Canada.

Oh so good.

I'll have to finish this off tomorrow cause everyone else is in bed and I had a really hard time just now trying not to laugh to loudly so that I almost fell off the chair. So well done and the emotions you show are really strong- hilarious, great plot. I can't think of a bad thing to say about it XD

Love with a capital 'L' this story's backdrop, love the different kinds of magic, love the image and personality of the main character, and the cliff hanger is set to be interesting! Which is why it's not a good thing that I have started this story quite late cause I'm going to have to keep reading XD

Oh my god please update soon! This is hilarious! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Awsome; update please? :)

Uh Oh, Spencer you really didn't is going to be even angrier then he already is, especially if he gets turned into something "weak" ie human or(laughing) an angel if that is even possible. can't wait for the next chapter