you prove to me everytime how great you make a poem sound with the rhyming; unforced and very flowing. Great job once again

Emotional. I like.

=)

Well... happy new year then :), lol

great poem, really good rythm. I loved all of your analogies and the pictures you painted with your words.

I apologize for the late review. time sort of escaped me.

Excellent poem my friend

The imagery and personification is excellent. There is aemotion stirred in this piece that I can't really find the word to describe... it's a somewhat sorrowful / tormented feeling *shrugs* Good poem

I liked this poem a lot. I liked how it rhymed, but mostly I liked the mood and and flow of it. great job.