Ha ha ha! That was a good one. It totally reminds me of a lot people I've encoutered throughout my lifetime...

Unbelievably true, I know girls just like that. It annoys me really. Very well written.

nice stuff! so good and real

Nice job. A couple of the rhymings seemed a bit forced, but overall I liked it.

it has a serious sort of subject, but i like the humorous approach to it, espeacilly towards the end.