this is lovely. it's relatable; the notion of having something to say to someone and never quite being able to say it, either by physical or mental barriers. It rhymes, but it flows and doesn't seem forced or unnatural. I like it.

oh how i can relate to this...

brilliantly written

Oh, very nice ending! I really enjoyed it. I could TOTALLY relate (oh, GOD, could I relate!) and it was basically very good. Sorry this is so short, but I'm really pressed for time at the moment. Great work, keep writing! :D

This poem flows very well and holds alot of emotion and unanswered questions. Good job on this one!Ravens Cross

wonderful. great job.

I love the lines "I saw you holding your face

In your hands

Can’t help wanting to understand"

I feel that exact same way when I see someone I love who is depressed! Great poem.