|Reviews for Unsaid things|
| ladychelope 2/24/13 . chapter 1
this is lovely. it's relatable; the notion of having something to say to someone and never quite being able to say it, either by physical or mental barriers. It rhymes, but it flows and doesn't seem forced or unnatural. I like it.
| Smoky Bear 11/7/05 . chapter 1
oh how i can relate to this...
| Crazy-Word-Painter 5/19/05 . chapter 1
Oh, very nice ending! I really enjoyed it. I could TOTALLY relate (oh, GOD, could I relate!) and it was basically very good. Sorry this is so short, but I'm really pressed for time at the moment. Great work, keep writing! :D
| Ravens Cross 1/20/05 . chapter 1
This poem flows very well and holds alot of emotion and unanswered questions. Good job on this one!Ravens Cross
| Aslan Israel 1/20/05 . chapter 1
wonderful. great job.
| Camman 1/17/05 . chapter 1
I love the lines "I saw you holding your face
In your hands
Can’t help wanting to understand"
I feel that exact same way when I see someone I love who is depressed! Great poem.