Reviews for It's like catching sand

xhaiiro
2006-11-15
ch 1,

This is so beautiful. I love the metaphor and the structure you used.

aqua-angel
2005-09-01
ch 1,

xD Your author's note is killing me, hahaha oh boy...

Ah... this poem brings back memories. Not exactly great ones. But the beginning got to me. For me, it made me think about how much people don't know me and, evidently, i don't like revealing myself so I hide even more and push people back. Okay, so I just lost my train of thought but what you said about the interpretation makes sense. The windows and doors symbolism or what not (I'm assuming they represent home which represents the heart. Heart = who you really are) was pretty cool. I contemplated on it as my radio goes through an ad of windows and doors xD The irony...

Wow... I'm rambling a lot now. Sorry. I guess I haven't rambled off in a while and so now you must endure through my relentless talking. I'll stop now. hehe Get laid xD Kills me.

keep on writing

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