This one's a really good poem also. You have a way with writing... -sigh- It's just so purdy. I want it for my own. ;_; lol. XD I hope that the muse (whether its Baxter or another one ;) ) helps you to write more. See ya~! ^^

Yay, more writy-ness from the Aly-chan ^_^ Lol. Gods, I think I'm channelling one of my otaku friends :P That was frightening.

I like it ^_^ It's pretty. A nice and happy thing to read when I'm feeling like **, which is good, since, let's face it, feeling like ** sucks gratuitious amounts of canal water. Yeah. Whatever I'm channelling, it certainly isn't the editor in me. Sorry, hun. I like-eed it, though! ^_^

Alright, so it's not your usual work. But it doesn't suck, Wissa-chan. It's still a pretty good poem. And no, I'm not saying this just to be a suck-up, because you know that I'd rather shoot myself than be a suck-up to anyone. I can see what you meant by this being rushed, because it doesn't really match your usual style. -Shrug.- Doesn't mean it's horrible. Just try writing something...look at me. Gotta work on something at least every month.

I like the determination in this poem.

It doesn't suck! I like the imagery. I am not sure if I understand all of it but good poetry is always hard to understand at first.