interesting, ive been trying to explain this to a friend for a long while, about how you shouldnt try to get your own back on someone because well it never stops, best just to accept and move on sometimes, although revenge can be pretty sweet :) haha, anyway, this has a nice structure and an interesting rhyme scheme, thanks for the review by the way, hope to have your opinion on my other poems too x weasel within x

I think that is a really touching poem. I love the way you use fire. It is really good.

O... That's some powerful shi* right there! Excellent work!