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| ScarletDreamer 2005-11-10 ch 1, | very good :) however, I think the rhyming scheme kind of lost its pattern from the middle to the end. Although, I believe the poem still got its idea across very well, and was incredibly well written. Keep up the amazing work!! |
| GayBoy23 2005-01-17 ch 1, | I liked it. I actually kind of relate to it myself. |
| shie 2005-01-17 ch 1, | sorry, i cant really say good job because its really clinched already but i do like your poem. |