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LuckyCharm.698 2007-01-31 . chapter 1
The thing that gets to me is the fact that they dont even hear themselves or see wat they're doing wen all they do it yell and scream. *Shakes head*

Anyway the poem was good, short but to the point. i like it.
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-02-20 . chapter 1
Hmm I like this... it's very deep and that suprised me a bit, it's also very true and I'm sure loads of people can relate to it, so it's a good poem, well done x weasel within x
Out-Of-Reality 2005-02-08 . chapter 1
Short and sweet! lol. Exactly like it is here so thats why im glad i finally got a door
T. T. Goldsmith 2005-01-25 . chapter 1
I think with some families, that is how they rationalize their existence as a biological unit. It's weird.
Fabian Cortez 2005-01-24 . chapter 1
Thanks for the reviews; they are always appreciated. :-)

Highly impactive; I can certainly understand that screaming and shouting etc, can drive a person to distraction and sadly sometimes worse.

KEEP WRITING!

F.C
Shinyfighter 2005-01-23 . chapter 1
Wow that one really hits straight to the point! :D I don't really have that problem since I'm a deep sleeper! :P
simpleplan13 2005-01-19 . chapter 1
i can realte.. short but great
poetic abortion 2005-01-18 . chapter 1
Feral you have left me in awe once more. ^-^ *hugs* I adore this poem even if it's sad.(Ya like mine aren't ? ^.~) I love this so much , it is exactly how I feel although me or my sister start the little wars. (That grow real big if my older brother gets involved.) You have described how I've felt at this moment since a fight occured. *adds to fav. stories lists.*

~* Noelle *~
Mynix 2005-01-18 . chapter 1
Very powerful Love it...
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